All wrong. What’s needed is a bright and cheerful image of health and joy. Presenting two more drafts to the customer.
Selecting the first sketch and turning it into a finished illustration.
Adding corrections, petals, and a scarf to the picture. Aging the guy and turning his hand in a different way.
Changing the guy’s look and making him wear a polo instead of a tee.
Meanwhile, working on the text.
Originally, the book was titled “I Choose Health.”
Bringing the title up-to-date with a fresher line “How To Remain Young and Healthy, Eat Nutritiously and on Budget.”
Breaking the title into the main and a sub.
Changing the book title once more, trimming it back to the point.
Playing with typefaces.
Adding more reviews for the total of three on the back cover.